Will you review this narration for placement purposes?
Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2014 12:53 pm
I was pretty sure about using CTC for my daughter but I realized I'm not really sure about written narrations. She's always been a "natural" oral narrator, but I've never given her any instruction on written narration. I don't want to assume and end up in the wrong guide. DD just turned 10 and in 4th grade.
I called her in and read her a random selection of paragraphs from a book and told her to retell the story on paper. It took her about 5 minutes and here is what she came up with:
I woke up sometime in the night. It was very hard to breathe in the stables. Ginger was coughing. One of the horses was restless. The stable was filled with smoke. From above I could hear crakaling and snapping. Suddenly, the ostler came in and tried to pull one horse after another out of the stables. We wouldn't move. The crakaling and snapping grew louder. I looked up and saw a red glow. Outside, I heard men shout, FIRE!
All spelling and punctuation was her own, except she asked me how to spell "ostler".
Obviously her writing is choppy so she could use some help with that and varying her sentence structure. So with this being her first attempt at a written narration, would you suggest Preparing or CTC? She fits in CTC for everything else, so I'd like to place her there if she is ready.
Thanks for your help!
I called her in and read her a random selection of paragraphs from a book and told her to retell the story on paper. It took her about 5 minutes and here is what she came up with:
I woke up sometime in the night. It was very hard to breathe in the stables. Ginger was coughing. One of the horses was restless. The stable was filled with smoke. From above I could hear crakaling and snapping. Suddenly, the ostler came in and tried to pull one horse after another out of the stables. We wouldn't move. The crakaling and snapping grew louder. I looked up and saw a red glow. Outside, I heard men shout, FIRE!
All spelling and punctuation was her own, except she asked me how to spell "ostler".

Thanks for your help!