Write with the Best...question/snag...
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Write with the Best...question/snag...
We are on day 3 of Write with the Best and both my son and I (and I have an English degree) found the "Underline the descriptive adjectives in blue, the descriptive nouns in red...etc" part to a bit too challenging for my son. He is a struggling writer and when he saw this part, he went to pieces. He is good at grammar, but this is not just plain grammar...it was pretty particular about finding the "descriptive" nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs and that threw him for a loop. He was in tears by the time he finished and his attempt was marginal, at best. Most of the nouns he circled were not descriptive, and so on. We went back and did it together and he seemed to understand a bit more.
I was about to just ditch it, and then I decided to read on. I really like the way the program is laid out and I think it is really worth its weight. My question for Carrie, Julie, or anyone else who can answer is: How important is that particular part of the program? Is it okay for us to work together, even though he is a 6th grader (11 years old). Any feedback or ideas to make him more successful.
I was about to just ditch it, and then I decided to read on. I really like the way the program is laid out and I think it is really worth its weight. My question for Carrie, Julie, or anyone else who can answer is: How important is that particular part of the program? Is it okay for us to work together, even though he is a 6th grader (11 years old). Any feedback or ideas to make him more successful.
~Rebecca~
ds13(8th) - Rev to Rev w/ TT Pre-Algebra, R&S English 6, CLE Reading 8, Rosetta Stone French
ds9 (4th) - Preparing Hearts, TT Math 4, R&S English 3, CLE Reading 4, & Writeshop Jr.
We have completed LHFHG, BLHFHG, Bigger, CTC, & RTR.
ds13(8th) - Rev to Rev w/ TT Pre-Algebra, R&S English 6, CLE Reading 8, Rosetta Stone French
ds9 (4th) - Preparing Hearts, TT Math 4, R&S English 3, CLE Reading 4, & Writeshop Jr.
We have completed LHFHG, BLHFHG, Bigger, CTC, & RTR.
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Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
Here is a link to a thread where I brought up the same problem.
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=6936
ETA Don't give up on it yet. I was disappointed at first but now I'm thrilled with it. My kids have liked the other assignments after that one and I will help them with that assignment next time.

ETA Don't give up on it yet. I was disappointed at first but now I'm thrilled with it. My kids have liked the other assignments after that one and I will help them with that assignment next time.
~Leah
Wife to the Man I Love since 1994
DS 15 Missions to Modern Marvels
DD 14 Resurrection to Reformation
Wife to the Man I Love since 1994
DS 15 Missions to Modern Marvels
DD 14 Resurrection to Reformation
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Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
Oh what a wonderful link! Thank you so much. I am so glad to see I was not alone, nor was my son, in finding this challenging and confusing. That you for directing me to your thread!
~Rebecca~
ds13(8th) - Rev to Rev w/ TT Pre-Algebra, R&S English 6, CLE Reading 8, Rosetta Stone French
ds9 (4th) - Preparing Hearts, TT Math 4, R&S English 3, CLE Reading 4, & Writeshop Jr.
We have completed LHFHG, BLHFHG, Bigger, CTC, & RTR.
ds13(8th) - Rev to Rev w/ TT Pre-Algebra, R&S English 6, CLE Reading 8, Rosetta Stone French
ds9 (4th) - Preparing Hearts, TT Math 4, R&S English 3, CLE Reading 4, & Writeshop Jr.
We have completed LHFHG, BLHFHG, Bigger, CTC, & RTR.
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Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
You're very welcome Rebecca!!
And no you were not alone.
On a side note my kids really liked the assignment that required them to find more descriptive words in a thesaurus. I don't have a thesaurus(need to buy one) so I used an online one and allowed them to pick from the list of words. They thought this was really fun and made each other promise they would use their new words in casual conversation that day. LOL They mostly picked funny words they'd never heard before like nice=ducky, house=flat or box. lol


~Leah
Wife to the Man I Love since 1994
DS 15 Missions to Modern Marvels
DD 14 Resurrection to Reformation
Wife to the Man I Love since 1994
DS 15 Missions to Modern Marvels
DD 14 Resurrection to Reformation
Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
Rebecca,
Yes, you're right that day is a challenge! I always did it with my kiddos. I actually did all of WWTB with my son, helping and guiding.
So, that is a great way to do it! I, too, had to give myself permission to NOT make my son find all of the adjectives, adverbs, and nouns (even though WWTB did tell me I didn't have to find all of them in their directions).
On those days, I advise finding a few of each part of speech listed and moving on! The activity is a good one in moderation, and the rest of WWTB is excellent!
Great question!
Blessings,
Carrie
Yes, you're right that day is a challenge! I always did it with my kiddos. I actually did all of WWTB with my son, helping and guiding.


On those days, I advise finding a few of each part of speech listed and moving on! The activity is a good one in moderation, and the rest of WWTB is excellent!

Great question!
Blessings,
Carrie
Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
When we did this, I had Grant look for 8 of everything. (Except adverbs - I think we did 4 or 5 of those) And, it was pretty doable. Finding them all would have been way over the top for us, too!
Kathleen


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Grant - 19 Kansas State University
Allison - 15 World Geography
Garret - 13 Res2Ref
Asa - 8 Bigger
Quinn - 7 Bigger
Halle - 4 LHTH
Grant - 19 Kansas State University
Allison - 15 World Geography
Garret - 13 Res2Ref
Asa - 8 Bigger
Quinn - 7 Bigger
Halle - 4 LHTH
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Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
Rebecca, we're in sync with our CTC. And we had an emotional time with that part also. I'm going to have to set the timer, because even though I sat down and helped him through it, we still went way too long. It really overwhelmed him, so I'll be helping out with that part every time in the future.
Hope your math went better! I plan on using LOF in the future.
Alison
Hope your math went better! I plan on using LOF in the future.
Alison
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Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
Hi,
We had tears the first few times with that as well last year. However, I quickly realized I needed to work along side my dd and not find them all. We went sentence by sentence sometimes and other times we were more random. By the middle of the year we were doing much better and I wouldn't let the time linger on with how long we spent on it. 10-15 min. max.
anyway--I really liked this program and glad we persevered and found way to make it work for us. Keep on working with it and all will be well!
Off to 'school'--my ds is eagerly waiting to begin!
Jess
We had tears the first few times with that as well last year. However, I quickly realized I needed to work along side my dd and not find them all. We went sentence by sentence sometimes and other times we were more random. By the middle of the year we were doing much better and I wouldn't let the time linger on with how long we spent on it. 10-15 min. max.
anyway--I really liked this program and glad we persevered and found way to make it work for us. Keep on working with it and all will be well!
Off to 'school'--my ds is eagerly waiting to begin!
Jess
Jess
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happy wife to DH of 14 yrs and mama to DD12, DD9, DS6, DD4
DD12--Rev2Rev
DD9--Preparing
DS6--The Reading Lesson!
DD4--LHTH
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Re: Write with the Best...question/snag...
Thank you for preparing me for this lesson. We'll be starting CTC when we return from vacation after Labor Day. My dd gets over the top at times, and to know how to head it off beforehand = priceless!
Thank you for sharing this!
Thank you for sharing this!
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